Amplifi front cover draft 12

I have put his picture just infront of the title so his hair is not covered. However the P in the title Amplifi is still clear what letter it is, because i pulled the title closer to the top of the page.

Amplifi front cover draft 11

On this page i have added in another black box and used the same style/ colour wiritng as the one next to it. I have also slanted it to match it to the other box. This makes it look more colourful and adds some extra style and information to the page, because its an extra piece on the page.

Amplifi front cover 10

On this page i have changed:

• the colour of the white boxes around the writing to grey
• added shadow around the grey boxes
• outlined the page with a black line

Amplifi front cover 9

in this page i have changed:

• the size of the writing in the white strip at the bottom
• the angle of the black box at the bottom
• the size of the price and issue number
• the white boxes around the "freshest update" and "big"
• the size of the kieran tomp headline quote

Amplifi pages 8

Amplifi Contents picture 7

Amplifi pictures 6

Amplifi pages 5

on this page i have changed:

• the positioning of the pictures
• the colours of boxes used around some forms of text
• i have added a drop quote and made it big/ bold
• chnaged quotes into italic writing
• positioning of text forms; the title and tour dates
• straightened the tour dates- make it look neater
• the size of the wiritng to fit everything in

I will also be using different pictures of the same model, to add colour and make it look less blank. This will work better, because the pictures wont look the same. Also, i will be using either a close up and long shot, to avoid using the same mid shot that has already been used throughout the 3pages. This will also work, because it wont be the same picture for all 3 pages for the main story.

Amplifi pages changes 4

Feedback

Based on my feedback i have chamged:

• Pictures on the front cover to fit better and look less awkward when cutting them and editing them
• Writing on contents
• Adding in more story titles and page numbers
• Adding in more sub headings to make each page article more clear
• Changing pictures on contens to make more clear
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Amplifi cover, contents and dp spread update

 For my front cover i removed some of the headings and made the remaining headings larger and straghter to make it seem more sophistcated. I also replaced the picture, so it was easier to his face. This was important for the audience to see what the main image actually looked like.
For my contents page, i took out some of the stroy headings to make more space. Due to this increase in space on the page, i put on a box for the remaining stories to make it straighter and (again) more sophistaved and easier to read. I also removed a small picture and made the main story image bigger to enhance the importance of that story.

Amplifi cover/contents 2

On this page i am going to change the main image and put it n the middle with the various article titles around it to make it look neater and more sophisticated.

On this page i am going to cnage the layout and make everything more orderly so it is easier to read.

Amplifi Double Page Spread

Amplifi front cover and contents page